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Love is in Control
My mind rushes
And my heart gushes
The joy I now feel
Is oh so unreal
Trying to calm my emotions
Is like taming the oceans
My thoughts are cluttered
And my body shuddered
I always feel this way
And never know quite what to say
I must be in love
With this gift from above
This feeling is so new
I hope it is true
Give me a hint
One that is heart sent
If my thoughts are wrong
Then send me along
But I will wait
In hope of one more date
My mind rushes
And my heart gushes
The joy I now feel
Is oh so unreal
Trying to calm my emotions
Is like taming the oceans
My thoughts are cluttered
And my body shuddered
I always feel this way
And never know quite what to say
I must be in love
With this gift from above
This feeling is so new
I hope it is true
Give me a hint
One that is heart sent
If my thoughts are wrong
Then send me along
But I will wait
In hope of one more date
hmm I guess this is emotional poetry... so many choices :0 anyway, here is the first poem that I have written… I wrote it for a special somebody, but will probably never give it to her, as I am quite shy. Anyway, let me know what you think. As I love comments so I can improve my work 
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heh heh, had to know everyone would tell you to give it to her! Oh well, nice work for a first peice... good luck in the future, and I'm a big fan of all your work.